APM Principal Andrew Pegler judged NZ’s plain English awards 2022

Groaning retail lease sample editing

APM Principal Andrew Pegler has just finished #judging NZ’s #plainenglish awards in the #legalease category. APM does a lot of legal editing. Here’s an extract from our edit of a groaning retail lease. This was definitely not drafted for the long-suffering, non-legal retailer and our enlightened client wanted to change this.

#editing #writingtips #awards2022 #plainlanguage